Trailer, Take 3

It was River’s turn this time (Silver Seas PR and my go-to guy for marketing). He still thinks the trailer is too long, but he claims Take 3 is better than Take 2, which was better than Take 1.

It’s always a good idea to be on the upswing instead of the downturn, isn’t it?

And I really, really don’t want it to be much shorter because of the song. I love the song, the words, the tune.

Your thoughts?